Sunday, June 5, 2011


By: Adrielle R. Bollin

Gonna go a new way
Cause today's a new day
And I feel a new sway
Reaching down to my legs

And I think I might skip
And double triple my trip
Because it just feels that good
To hear the way that I should

You know you bring me around
With just the slightest of sound
The way you love me's profound
Your heart for me it breaks ground

And you saved my soul
Though it was looking like coal
You took me under your wing
Now together we swing

Surely only you know
How to the ends I will go
Your sacrifice it did show
How much about me you know

I want to thank you in kind
For giving me this new mind
And this bright sunny sky
That money just couldn't buy


  1. Another lovely poem! Really enjoyed this one. :)

  2. The first two versus could be titled "Taking Charge" and the remaining versus "I Owe You". (I figure if I can't compose poetry, making I can get a job coming up with titles.)

    But then, your title "New" kinda' says it all. I can see I have some work to do.

    Enjoyed this a bunch -- and I hope it reflects your outlook these days.

  3. Shawn - Thanks! I'm glad! :)
    Jerry - Indeed it does for as long as I can keep up the courage :)

  4. I am a firm believer in taking new paths, going a new way. Lovely piece of writing.

    Have a beautiful Sunday Adrielle.


  5. I just love the rhythm and flow of your poetry, Adrielle...this one is exquisite! It reminds me of the innovative Fifties Beat poets holding court at coffe houses...dressed all in black, looking and sounding so cool. (Yes, I'm old...!!)

    Great poem!

  6. We all have those people that save our souls. I can always tell when I need to spend time with certain people, to get that special feeling that only they can add to our lives. You capture that so well here : )

  7. You have a great way with words.

  8. sweet words, well done.Have a great weekend my bloggy friend. Hugs♥


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